Hi Rachel,cemetery wallVictoria plums overhangunexpected snackAt the moment it's a kind of inversion, which you don't need because if you follow a linear progression you get the surprise effect e.g.unexpected snackVictoria plums overhangthe cemetery wallall my best,AlanAlan's Haiku Blog of Events
Oh! Excellent revision, Alan. Thank you.
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