One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way


chrysanthemum moon
i peel off another layer
of sorrow
that nobody
will notice

Pamela A. Babusci
A Thousand Reasons


Paul Smith said...

Absolutely gorgeous Pamela (they all are) but this one strikes a deep resonance within me.

listening to you
something like a bell
echoes within

Pamela A. Babusci said...


thank you so much! please let me
know when my tanka book arrives.

Paul Smith said...

It's here Pamela & FABULOUS!

diana l. said...

Ow. Beautiful.