One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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not a single star
out of place
in the Milky Way...
the garden gate
left ajar all night


Pamela A. Babusci
Tanka Splendor Awards
& in: A Thousand Reasons

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Sublime.

all my best,
Alan
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Pamela A. Babusci said...

alan,

many thanks! hugs, pamela

diana l. said...

So many scenarios can work with this. Compelling.