One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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daddy and daughter
planting gebera daisy
under the sunflowers

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

I like the alliteration here! ;-)

daddy and daughter
planting gebera daisy
under the sunflowers


Maybe consider an "a" in the middle line?

daddy and daughter
planting a gebera daisy
under the sunflowers


A gerbera oldie from me. ;-)

heavy downpour
a hover-fly goes deeper
into gerbera


Alan Summers
Snapshot Press Haiku Calendar 2006 (JULY)

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