I like the alliteration here! ;-)daddy and daughterplanting gebera daisyunder the sunflowersMaybe consider an "a" in the middle line?daddy and daughterplanting a gebera daisyunder the sunflowersA gerbera oldie from me. ;-)heavy downpoura hover-fly goes deeperinto gerberaAlan SummersSnapshot Press Haiku Calendar 2006 (JULY) weblink: Gerbera.
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I like the alliteration here! ;-)
daddy and daughter
planting gebera daisy
under the sunflowers
Maybe consider an "a" in the middle line?
daddy and daughter
planting a gebera daisy
under the sunflowers
A gerbera oldie from me. ;-)
heavy downpour
a hover-fly goes deeper
into gerbera
Alan Summers
Snapshot Press Haiku Calendar 2006 (JULY)
weblink: Gerbera
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