One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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goldfinch gathering thistledown
terra-cotta pot gathering rain


Pamela A. Babusci
9/29/09

3 comments:

Alan Summers said...

I love it!

goldfinch gathering thistledown
terra-cotta pot gathering rain


I like the way it can be read that it is the thistledown 'gathering' goldfinches as well as vice versa.

I think you can remove the hyphen for terracotta in this poem i.e.

goldfinch gathering thistledown
terracotta pot gathering rain


Alan

Kelly Marszycki said...

delightful! there's something about those little goldfinches, isn't there?

diana l. said...

I gather that you're very observant! (Sorry, couldn't resist that...)

A nice neat parallel.