I love it!goldfinch gathering thistledownterra-cotta pot gathering rainI like the way it can be read that it is the thistledown 'gathering' goldfinches as well as vice versa.I think you can remove the hyphen for terracotta in this poem i.e.goldfinch gathering thistledownterracotta pot gathering rainAlan
delightful! there's something about those little goldfinches, isn't there?
I gather that you're very observant! (Sorry, couldn't resist that...)A nice neat parallel.
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