One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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eggshell skies
in the cemetery
two fritillaries

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

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Absolutely stunning!

I adore that first line!

eggshell skies
in the cemetery
two fritillaries


There's a lot of resonance, allusion, and layers here, simply marvelous!

all my best,
Alan
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Leatherdykeuk said...

You are very kind, Alan. Thank you.