One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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my mood softens
flicker of falling leaves
upon the wall

4 comments:

John McDonald said...

love it
john

Alan Summers said...

I like this one.

Good word choice, and alliteration is subtle.

all my best,
Alan
With Words
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Paul Smith said...

This is absolutely beautiful Diana!

diana l. said...

Thank you, John, Alan, and Paul. Funny how much of a difference small moments of beauty can sometimes make.