One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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red tailed hawk
flies on sailer's tack
high pitched wind
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4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

red tailed hawk
flies on sailer's tack
high pitched wind


I really like that middle line!

You might consider an indefinite article so it reads:
"flies on a sailer's tack".

I also learned something new, as 'sailers' are small sailing boats. ;-)

all my best,

Alan
Area 17

Tumblewords: said...

Thanks, Alan - I appreciate the comment and the suggestion!
It's a good thing to learn something new...:)

Paul Smith said...

Beautiful Sue!

Tumblewords: said...

Thank you, Paul!