red tailed hawkflies on sailer's tackhigh pitched wind I really like that middle line! You might consider an indefinite article so it reads:"flies on a sailer's tack".I also learned something new, as 'sailers' are small sailing boats. ;-)all my best,AlanArea 17
Thanks, Alan - I appreciate the comment and the suggestion!It's a good thing to learn something new...:)
Beautiful Sue!
Thank you, Paul!
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red tailed hawk
flies on sailer's tack
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I really like that middle line!
You might consider an indefinite article so it reads:
"flies on a sailer's tack".
I also learned something new, as 'sailers' are small sailing boats. ;-)
all my best,
Alan
Area 17
Thanks, Alan - I appreciate the comment and the suggestion!
It's a good thing to learn something new...:)
Beautiful Sue!
Thank you, Paul!
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