One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
____________________________

so my friend
when will you visit me?
my flowers are withering
on the trellis and all the
geese have darkened the sky


Pamela A. Babusci
Tanka Splendor Awards
& in: A Thousand Reasons

9 comments:

John McDonald said...

delightful trio Pamela
john

John McDonald said...

delightful trio Pamela
john

John McDonald said...

delightful trio Pamela
john

John McDonald said...

delightful trio Pamela
john

Beatrice V said...

LOve it, Pamela.

Alan Summers said...

Phew, terrific tanka! ;-)

Alan

Paul Smith said...

All three are absolutely great Pamela.
One for you...

seeking an answer
beside the night river -
autumn moon

Laure said...

Pamela,

your heart ... your craft

astounds me.

Pamela A. Babusci said...

dear everybody,

many thanks for your kind words.

love, pamela
For Paul:

there is no answer
for this trembling
heart
moonbeams scattered
across river stones

Pamela A. Babusci 9/9/09