One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
____________________________

breathing in
dew from
chrysanthemums
still empty
after lovemaking

Pamela A. Babusci
pub. in MET
& in: A Thousand Reasons

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Delightfully romantically erotic. This feels like tanka! ;-)

Alan

Pamela A. Babusci said...

many thanks alan! ciao! pamela