One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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Sparkling suns
this wet autumn
colour slowly change

4 comments:

John McDonald said...

enjoyed this
john

Alan Summers said...

I really like this!

I wonder if it might need a slight tweaking?

Sparkling suns
this wet autumn
colour slowly change


sparkling suns
this wet autumn
colour slowly changes


Alan

Ashi said...

Thanks John.

Allan you got me (grammar is not what I do best) :) Thanks

R.K.SINGH said...

The third line is true: It rained here today and I could see what you have said.
R K