One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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under the weather
wishing Indian summer
would warm up my bones

1 comment:

Alan Summers said...

I really like this!

under the weather
wishing Indian summer
would warm up my bones


I just feel that the gerund 'ing' needs to go, and a further tweaking could be...?

under the weather
I wish this Indian summer
would warm my bones


Alan
Area 17
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