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One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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wind and rain
the cat sleeps in the spare room
overnight
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2 comments:

Area 17 said...

I love this! My cat used to sleep at the bottom of a 50sq foot bed I made from milk crates and foam strips. ;-)

wind and rain
the cat sleeps in the spare room
overnight

I don't think you need 'overnight' as 'sleeps' suggests that.

wind and rain
the cat sleeps
in the spare room

Alan
Area 17
.

September 04, 2009
Rachel Green said...

Thank you, Alan. Much improved.

September 04, 2009

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