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One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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a clatter
as the wind gets up
next door's dustbin

4 comments:

Area 17 said...

You should submit this to Haiku News!

It's good because it isn't a comment on the political issue around information abuse by councils employing hoodies to take intimate things from people's bins.

There, I bet you didn't realise you had said so much in this neat haiku. ;-)

Alan

Rachel Green said...

How curious!
Thank you Alan.

Kelly M. said...

wonderful racket to this haiku!

Rachel Green said...

Thanks Kelly.