This is very rich -- sound, imagery, tone -- excellent!
Wonderful.(What about the idea of switching the second and third lines for structural/rhythm purposes?)
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This is very rich -- sound, imagery, tone -- excellent!
Wonderful.
(What about the idea of switching the second and third lines for structural/rhythm purposes?)
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