One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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frost cuts deep
lacy ice patterns

2 comments:

Kelly Marszycki said...

the brevity adds to the beauty of this haiku -- love it!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Oh, thanks so much Kelly. I am trying to make my haiku simple and to the point. I am glad you liked it

love, Melanie

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