leaves gutter whirlin backdraft vorticestea steams the window Love this, but wonder if you would consider swapping the lines round?tea steams the windowbackdraft leaves whirlin the gutterAlan1000 Verse Renga.
Alan, you never cease to amaze me with your skill. Thank you.
I love the steamed window!
Thanks you :)
You're very good at humouring me, just as well I'm passionate about your haiku! ;-)Thanks Rachel! Alan
Thank you John
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