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One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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cold, stark, bare
we wait for winter

2 comments:

Kelly M. said...

we all seem to be so melancholy about winter -- you capture this sense beautifully!

nora said...

I like the alliteration of the last line, Melanie. It does evoke the melancholy.