I love stair-rods of rain, it's the best line and deserves to be the first line!on the windowsillthe cat flicks her tail, annoyedstair-rods of rain Maybe play with the haiku a bit more? e.g.stair-rods of rain the windowsill fanned by an irritated catall my best,AlanArea17.
oh, excellent!Thanks for the help, Alan.
"stair-rods of rain..." -- I imagine prison-cell bars. Great image!
Carlos, that's exactly what they looked like!
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