Rachel I like this a lot.but you don't need 'tinkle''chimes' is right word and it is already there.David
You're right of course!
Ouch. Well done, and good editing.
thank you Diana
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4 comments:
Rachel I like this a lot.
but you don't need 'tinkle'
'chimes' is right word and it is already there.
David
You're right of course!
Ouch. Well done, and good editing.
thank you Diana
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