Autumn

though the car window
nearly full moon hangs low
in afternoon sky

Area 17 said...: I like the idea, but feel the removal of articles makes it difficult to read.

though the car window
nearly full moon hangs low
in afternoon sky

e.g.

car window
a nearly full moon low
in the afternoon sky

or

car passenger
a nearly full moon low
in the afternoon sky

open car window
a nearly full moon low
in the afternoon sky

motor cruising
a nearly full moon low
in the afternoon sky

.; October 22, 2010
Spiros Zafiris said...: ..very nice..quite
interesting when one
reads: 'through the car
window'..did you mean to
say 'through' and made a typo

..>>spiros
---------------------; October 22, 2010
Reihaisha said...: Spiros, it was supposed to be "through". I was driving home and noticed the moon was already out and it the sky was just beginning to turn towards dusk. It was very cool.

Thanks for the input Alan.; October 22, 2010

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