One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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armistice day -
the red maple
lays its wreath

6 comments:

David said...

stunning John!

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Just wonderful John. In so few words you have said a lifetime.


Melanie

Alan Summers said...

Agree! ;-)

all my very best

Alan
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Jim Tantillo said...

nice!!

Möme said...

Beautiful.

diana l. said...

This is absolutely gorgeous and deserves to be entered into some contest somewhere.