One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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autumn wind -
a whistling boy
through the fallen leaves

4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Love it, that whistling boy is memorable.

all my very best

Alan
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Carlos Gesmundo said...

Nice one. I can hear the whistling!

Carlos

Möme said...

This one provides many different readings. Brilliant, John!

diana l. said...

Ibid.