One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way


first snow
half a year of white
before me

* * *

puoli vuotta valkeutta


diana l. said...

oh my.

Kelly M. said...

half year? ugh!

David said...

this is good

Möme said...

Thanks for the comments and sympathy :-)
Yes, here in central Finland we normally have permanent snow from the end of Oct to mid-April, and on May day there is normally no snow left and the lakes are free from ice. Now it seems such a long way away...

Spiros Zafiris said...

..very good poem..!!