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One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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..#73256

walking faster--
both with notable scarves,
man and dog
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..(C)2012 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Ram
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3 comments:

Spiros Zafiris said...

..am wondering which of the 3
is preferred

walking faster--
both with notable scarves,
man and dog

walking faster
both notably scarved,
man and dog

walking faster
both scarved notably,
man and dog
**
..(C)2012 Spiros Zafiris
..mostly channeled; spirit Ram
**

Beatrice V said...

Difficult to say... But I think I prefer the first one, Spiros
Love it and find it witty and interesting, the dog's 'scarf' given to various interpretations

Spiros Zafiris said...

..thanks much, Beatrice.i truly
appreciate your opinion..

..>>spiros
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