One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
____________________________

breaking
the red lacquered comb
in two...
deep autumn
& still no letter

Pamela A. Babusci
pub. in red lights
& in: A Thousand Reasons

2 comments:

Alan Summers said...

Those first two lines are terrific! They really draw me in. Great cliffhanger of a last line too. ;-)

Alan

Pamela A. Babusci said...

dear alan, you are always most kind to me. hugs, pamela