Those first two lines are terrific! They really draw me in. Great cliffhanger of a last line too. ;-)Alan
dear alan, you are always most kind to me. hugs, pamela
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Those first two lines are terrific! They really draw me in. Great cliffhanger of a last line too. ;-)
Alan
dear alan, you are always most kind to me. hugs, pamela
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