One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
____________________________

four winds
separating the chimes
tonight i will hang out
my blues
to dry

Pamela A. Babusci
part of a tanka seq.
Four Winds
pub. in Ribbons

7 comments:

Dennis Tomlinson said...

Sad but sweet

diana l. said...

How lovely. The last three lines remind me of something that could have been from an old Joni Mitchell song.

Beatrice V said...

Gorgeous!

Alan Summers said...

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Those last three lines even on their own are fantastic! ;-)

Alan
Area 17
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John McDonald said...

agreed, those three lines:- a knockout!!!!
john

Paul Smith said...

Just FAB Pamela.

Pamela A. Babusci said...

all you haiku poets are SO kind
to me-many thanks!
love, pamela