Sad but sweet
How lovely. The last three lines remind me of something that could have been from an old Joni Mitchell song.
Gorgeous!
.Those last three lines even on their own are fantastic! ;-)AlanArea 17.
agreed, those three lines:- a knockout!!!!john
Just FAB Pamela.
all you haiku poets are SO kindto me-many thanks!love, pamela
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Sad but sweet
How lovely. The last three lines remind me of something that could have been from an old Joni Mitchell song.
Gorgeous!
.
Those last three lines even on their own are fantastic! ;-)
Alan
Area 17
.
agreed, those three lines:- a knockout!!!!
john
Just FAB Pamela.
all you haiku poets are SO kind
to me-many thanks!
love, pamela
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