One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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soft brown form
spreads wings
honeyed coos

gentle sighs
sad song of love
fill damp air

2 comments:

ruma2008 said...

This haiku puts a great many meanings in few words. As oneself likes it, the person who read can interpret it variously. It catches the domain of a very wide human heart. ruma

Cassiopeia Rises said...

Thank you rumma. I am glad you liked it.


love, Melanie
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