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One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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nature's howling
wind rips leaves from trees
the last of the plums
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2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Here's my take,

the stillness
after the thunder
a few plums

September 04, 2009
Rachel Green said...

Thanks Martin. That's a big improvement.

September 04, 2009

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