Dear mysterious person ;-)crows become restlessgathering in murder--in a moment they are goneoverhead the cacophony of soundtogether they fly in formation--only the swift and strong shall returnI was wondering if this could be put into a tanka"ish" five line form maybe? e.g.restless crowsgathering in murderand cacophony of soundtogether they fly in formationonly the quick and strong returnall my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition Results.
Thanks Jenn! ;-)Love the photo, crows are always photogenic and entertaining. ;-)all my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition Results.
i think that would make a nice tanka...I always enjoy your images.the sounds of mallards fall to the next pond
Great help to have feedback. Tanku! :-)
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