i like the first two lines. Something likeon the corneryellow lamplight poolsinto the gutterDavid
David -- I suppose I was aiming to conjure up a sense of trepidation, impending dread?
how abouton the corneryellow lamplight poolsagainst the darknessthat leaves the reader with sense of dread without telling thembest wishesDavid
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i like the first two lines. Something like
on the corner
yellow lamplight pools
into the gutter
David
David -- I suppose I was aiming to conjure up a sense of trepidation, impending dread?
how about
on the corner
yellow lamplight pools
against the darkness
that leaves the reader with sense of dread without telling them
best wishes
David
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