One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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stones in a pocket
the topography of dreams
I carry through the day --

4 comments:

Alan Summers said...

a topography of dreams
I carry through the day
stones in a pocket --


I love that first line, but feel it's so good it could be a pivotal line.

e.g.

stones in a pocket
the topography of dreams
I carry through the day


Alan
1000 Verse Renga
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Kelly Marszycki said...

Ah, yes . . . Thank you, Alan -- I fiddled with that one too, too much. You begin to lose sight of the original intent after awhile!

diana l. said...

Very rich.

Kelly Marszycki said...

Thank you, Diana!