a topography of dreamsI carry through the daystones in a pocket --I love that first line, but feel it's so good it could be a pivotal line.e.g.stones in a pocketthe topography of dreamsI carry through the dayAlan1000 Verse Renga.
Ah, yes . . . Thank you, Alan -- I fiddled with that one too, too much. You begin to lose sight of the original intent after awhile!
Very rich.
Thank you, Diana!
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a topography of dreams
I carry through the day
stones in a pocket --
I love that first line, but feel it's so good it could be a pivotal line.
e.g.
stones in a pocket
the topography of dreams
I carry through the day
Alan
1000 Verse Renga
.
Ah, yes . . . Thank you, Alan -- I fiddled with that one too, too much. You begin to lose sight of the original intent after awhile!
Very rich.
Thank you, Diana!
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