sunlight gilds treetopsover the football pitcha rainbow smileI really like this but wonder if you need "gilds"?sunlit treetopsover the football pitchthat rainbow smileAlanp.s. thanks for the neat renga verse by the way! ;-).
You're right again, Alan, thanks.My please re the renga verse - I hope you can fit it somewhere. I always thought renga verses were in response to the previous one.
Hi Rachel,re renga verses, they are normally linked to previous verse, and in most cases we have managed to do that.But we are having such a flood of renga verses each day (24 hours a day) via two cellphone txt numbers; Myspace; Twitter; Facebook; five email addresses; and visitors to Bath Central Library plus all the other county libraries, plus schools in Sydney Australia and Leicestershire in England with different time zones, that it's not always possible to do this renga in the normal traditional manner even though I'm in contact via phone and web 14 hours a day. I need a holiday! ;-)Alan
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