Dear mysterious person ;-)crows become restlessgathering in murder--in a moment they are goneoverhead the cacophony of soundtogether they fly in formation--only the swift and strong shall returnI was wondering if this could be put into a tanka"ish" five line form maybe? e.g.restless crowsgathering in murderand cacophony of soundtogether they fly in formationonly the quick and strong returnall my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition Results.
Thanks Jenn! ;-)Love the photo, crows are always photogenic and entertaining. ;-)all my best,AlanWith Words Online Haiku Competition Results.
i think that would make a nice tanka...I always enjoy your images.the sounds of mallards fall to the next pond
Great help to have feedback. Tanku! :-)
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Dear mysterious person ;-)
crows become restless
gathering in murder
--in a moment they are gone
overhead the cacophony of sound
together they fly in formation
--only the swift and strong shall return
I was wondering if this could be put into a tanka"ish" five line form maybe?
e.g.
restless crows
gathering in murder
and cacophony of sound
together they fly in formation
only the quick and strong return
all my best,
Alan
With Words Online Haiku Competition Results
.
Thanks Jenn! ;-)
Love the photo, crows are always photogenic and entertaining. ;-)
all my best,
Alan
With Words Online Haiku Competition Results
.
i think that would make a nice tanka...
I always enjoy your images.
the sounds of mallards fall to the next pond
Great help to have feedback. Tanku! :-)
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