One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way


Dawn --a little paler
and wilting honeysuckle,
at the frosted window


Kilauea Poetry said...

I liked this thought..nice-

ruma said...

Hello, Beatrice V. Thank you for visiting it in my blog. As for your haiku, delicate expression is very beautiful.  ruma

こんにちわ、Beatrice V。私のブログに訪問してくれてありがとうございます。あなたの俳句は、繊細な表現が非常に美しいです。 ruma

ruma said...

I can imagine the scene that autumn gradually deepens from this haiku. The thing expressed here stands still entirely. However, that a season of the Nature moves will be taken by the person who read this haiku. It is the splendid contents which expressed movement by standstill. ruma

(Because this is Japanese to let right Englishment form, it is slightly strange Japanese. Please forgive it.)