One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way


four winds
separating the chimes
tonight i will hang out
my blues
to dry

Pamela A. Babusci
part of a tanka seq.
Four Winds
pub. in Ribbons


Dennis Tomlinson said...

Sad but sweet

diana l. said...

How lovely. The last three lines remind me of something that could have been from an old Joni Mitchell song.

Beatrice V said...


Area 17 said...

Those last three lines even on their own are fantastic! ;-)

Area 17

John McDonald said...

agreed, those three lines:- a knockout!!!!

Paul Smith said...

Just FAB Pamela.

Pamela A. Babusci said...

all you haiku poets are SO kind
to me-many thanks!
love, pamela