One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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grey clouds
a flotilla stretched thin
pines sway
rhythms of the northern wind . . .

3 comments:

Area 17 said...

Kelly, what a wonderful poem!

Kelly M. said...

thanks, Alan. having trouble "shifting gears" from one season to the next -- keep working on it!

Area 17 said...

You're doing fine! ;-)

all my best,
Alan
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