One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
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puddles:
making a jigsaw
of the sky

5 comments:

Paul Smith said...

Absolutely FABULOUS John!

Rachel Green said...

What a super image that makes

Area 17 said...

Superb, and clever crafting of that colon.

An excellent move to incorporate a kireji!

Alan
Area 17
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diana l. said...

What fun!

David said...

Stunning haiku John