One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way


the uncertainty
of the weathervane -
autumn wind


Area 17 said...

Love the first line!
Love the second line!
Love the whole poem!

all my best,
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nora said...

Really fabulous, Paul!!

Paul Smith said...

Alan & Nora your encouragement is a gift to me. Thank you