One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way


the patterns of frost-
black-headed gulls squabble
over a rooftop


Beatrice V said...

I think this is wonderful, Alan, just love it!

Area 17 said...

Thanks Beatrice!

It's still very much a haiku in progress so any encouragement is gratefully received. ;-)

Spiros Zafiris said...

..yea, very visual; good one..!