One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way


autumn dusk -
still many unknown roads
to travel


John McDonald said...

yes many Paul

Area 17 said...

Too true.

I like your choice of words and their order. Very subtle inner craft there, beneath the surface.


Kelly M. said...

certainly imbues a sense of time running out -- beautifully sad

nora said...

Love it, Paul!!

Reihaisha said...

very nice, Paul

diana l. said...

Very rich. One to return to read again.

Paul Smith said...

Thank you all for your generous comments.