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One edge
hanging over the mountain--
the Milky Way

---Shiki
____________________________

end of summer
their only daughter
leaves for college

3 comments:

Pan Haiku Review said...

Gulp! What an emotive middle line.

Alan

diana l. said...

end of summer
my eldest child
commutes to college



(Phew. Mama breathes a quick sigh of relief.) Hope you weather the transition easily.

Vic Gendrano said...

Hi Folks,

Don't tell the boys, it's just that dads especially have a warm(er) heart for their daughters.